Great writers from George Orwell to Hemingway have thrilled and entertained their audience with the use of judicious f-bombs and c-nukes. Please o author, knock yourself the fuck out.
I like the Mario Diary, it's a great idea. I would make a change and get rid of the bad language. You could say the same things without the cursing, instead of burn my Ass off use burn my butt off, instead of GD plumber just use Damn Plumber, etc.
You use some innuendo and do so effectively. Instead of the foul mouth stuff be more subtle. It would make it more interesting and open the Mario Diaries up to a much larger audience.
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You use some innuendo and do so effectively. Instead of the foul mouth stuff be more subtle. It would make it more interesting and open the Mario Diaries up to a much larger audience.
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